Wednesday, February 18, 2009

Ethel the Space Pirate, Chapter Ten

Hi everyone,

I've got to crack down on the sequel to Beyond the Rain, consequently, I need a little more time to write, and poor Ethel is going to have to suffer. I'm going to do Ethel posts every other week. So this post will be the tenth installment of Ethel the Space Pirate. You'll have until Monday to vote, then I'll post the new post on the Wednesday of the week following. That gives me eight days to write a new post, instead of just one.

If you're a loyal fan of Ethel, you need to speak up. Otherwise I don't know how many people are actually reading, and it's hard to stay motivated with a deadline coming up. As always, if you'd like to read the whole enchilada, click here.

Ethel focused all her attention on morphing the string of coded gibberish into a single string of coherent nastiness as she blended it seamlessly into the security protocols. She had to pick up one of the nav-pings of the enemy ships, so she could enter into their command codes.

Her mother had more straight-forward and bloodier means of taking out the trash, she preferred stealth. Her dear mother had called her Mouse, intending it to be an insult. Ethel liked the name. She chewed holes in corners where no one ever looked, then sneaked in and took what she needed to survive. Mice were survivors.

Ethel tried to ignore the little voice of doubt that reminded her that mice were the bottom of the food chain on nearly every planet.

Code, concentrate on the code.

Her fingers flew through command sequences, a seamless extension of her rapid-fire thoughts. She'd done this before. It turned out well, not so much for Devar, but she'd escaped, and that's all that mattered.

Her eyes caught the flash of a nav-ping.

"Got ya," she whispered under her breath as Keo snuggled closer to her heart. She'd have to do this one on her own. She wasn't plugging her bird into anything else until she was sure he was okay. She'd have to rely on her mind and what was left of the viral signature in her personal com from when she'd infected Devar's ship.

She felt a disconcerting heat to her left, and nearly jumped out of her skin as Qinn's roughened hand eased down onto the console. He leaned forward, inspecting the screen, even as the warmth from his chest seeped into the bit of exposed skin at the back of her neck. She could practically feel the rough stubble of his jaw as he lowered his face next to hers. She kept her eyes on the screen.

"The miners are armed and I've set them up in flanking rows along route-C. It will give them the best shot, and funnel the Peva into a smaller space for us," he murmured right next to her ear.

She tried to stifle an unsettling shiver.

"You're not old enough to be Tel-Arnath," he accused.

Ethel's gut dropped into her boots. "I'm well preserved."

"I'm an archeologist, I know well-preserved." He didn't bother to look at her, but the reflection of his ice-like eyes skewered her from the screen. "You're a liar."

"You've said as much." She pushed away from him and kicked the android's foot. "L2, replicate this code into the security grid subset 0157-F.R code path 40976247."

The android seemed to sober up with the input of a coding command. She swung around and plugged her hands into the security grid.

"I'm going to find out what you're hiding, Ethel."

She glared at him. Men! They were about to get blasted out of the stinking desert, and he just had to puff his chest out and thump it a few times.

"This isn't a good time for me."

He chuckled. "Whatever you say, captain."

She thought about smacking him one. The first time had been strangely satisfying, but there were more pressing matters at hand before they all died. She had to figure out how to initiate her virus. She could use her com, but that would open up the signal to Devar, or she could risk her life and manually transfer the viral strain through the conduit to the amplifiers in the shields. The only other way to do it was to send someone into the storm in the conveyor.

Unfortunately, all three of those options could cost her her life.

What should Ethel do?

A: Use her com
B: Manually transfer the virus
C: Ride out in the conveyor

You have until noon EST on Monday Feb. 23rd to decide. The new post will be up on March 4.

Have fun!

Jess

13 comments:

Vicky W said...

Thanks Jess! I've been reading Ethel since the beginning and have voted almost every week. It is fun to see how you come up with new ideas to coincide with the voting. But, IMHO, it's more important that you get paid for your work so even if you only posted a little bit every month, I would be thankful.

Jess Granger said...

Wow, thanks Vicky. I had no idea.

I'm glad that people are following the story. That's the one thing that makes any story worth writing, to know someone out there is reading.

Jess

Heather said...

Great stuff, as usual! I remembered to vote this time. Congratulations on the sequel! I agree with Vicky, even once a month for Ethel would be fine.

Jess Granger said...

I might have to boil it down to once a month, but we'll try every other week for a while and see how that goes. I love the story, though not knowing where it is going can get a little frustrating for me.

I'm a plotter, not a pantser.

Jess

Anne Elizabeth Baldwin said...

It can be hard to keep writing when you don't have much a cheering section, can't it? Particularly on the web, where responses are the main reward. {Smile}

Anne Elizabeth Baldwin

Jess Granger said...

It is hard. Thanks for commenting Anne. I'm mostly writing Ethel to fill in the time until Beyond the Rain comes out and we can seriously talk about that. I can't talk about it. No one has read it yet. I hope that changes when the book comes out, but until then, we have Ethel.

Again, it's nice to know it's an effort not wasted.

Jess

Anne Elizabeth Baldwin said...

No, it's not in vain. I've been enjoying this since I found it maybe a month ago. {Smile}

I got a particular chuckle out of his response to "well-preserved." {SMILE}

Anne Elizabeth Baldwin

Jess Granger said...

It's amazing how many lines like that come flying out of nowhere. They make me laugh when I'm writing them. The book I'm working on now is full of them.

Jess

Anne Elizabeth Baldwin said...

It's so neat when lines pop up like that! {chuckle, REALLY BIG GRIN}

Anne Elizabeth Baldwin

Frances said...

Jess, You know that I have been following Ethel since the beginning and think that it's a hoot. I understand having to budget your time though. I've run into the same wall. Best of luck with all of your writing and I will continue to follow Ethel when you have the time to get her out there. :-)

Jess Granger said...

I'm going to try to stay consistent so you guys know when to expect a post, (every other Wednesday.) I know people like the story, and I do too. I'm not ready to stop it yet.

Jess

Anne Elizabeth Baldwin said...

I'm glad you're trying for consistency in posting. I'm terrible at that myself. Still, I like it, especially when I'm following a story like Ethel's. {SMILE}

Anne Elizabeth Baldwin

L2 said...

I'm still here - and agree with the others, if you need to cut back that's fine - I personally can't wait for Beyond the Rain as well.